Shattered Broken Pieces of Glass

Shattered Broken Pieces of Glass

A Poem by Amanda

Shattered broken pieces of glass..

Oh they knew it would never last.

For she's up.

And he's down.

She's left.

He's right.

She's here.

He's there.

It's so sad.

And now it's shattered broken pieces of glass.

 

© 2010 Amanda


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Thanks so much everyone it really puts a smile on my face to hear your review!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh, wow!
That is one amazing poem. I love how you throw in some rhyme and make it flow well. The ending is the kicker that makes this poem so great!
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Oh I love it! Like Jess said you are a great writer. You can write from a deep place. That's great. You just latched on and know how it works.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very deep and meaningful. you have promise as a writer, Amanda!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I'm Amanda. Most of my friends call me Manda. :) I can be kinda weird sometimes when I'm with my friends. But, I have a big heart. My family's the best. Dance is my passion. Taylor Swift's my role mo.. more..

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