His Waters

He longs for you to swim in his lake of vastness,

In His pure waters of sanctity.

He beckons you to lie upon the shores of his acceptance.

In silent laughter,

He will kiss your skin with the sun.

In joyful exultation,

He will whisper the breeze across your body.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Use of nature always make the words have meaning. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wonderful words and imagery. Perfection!!!

[realmwriter]

This is a very picturesque write for me... My favorite line "He will kiss your skin with the sun" And everyday it is proven to me that God really does exsist!!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Such a beautiful poem of love. Your descriptive words right on cue. Loved it.

[Enigma]

Wow. Marvellous. Seems like a dedication written for a dear love while waiting tables, written and paper napkin. Just an imaginary guess. :P

I loved it. It short, simple and simply beautiful. Ideally, I should have more words of praise but I'm a bit restless to read it again. :)

Outstanding write.