His Waters

He longs for you to swim in his lake of vastness,

In His pure waters of sanctity.

He beckons you to lie upon the shores of his acceptance.

In silent laughter,

He will kiss your skin with the sun.

In joyful exultation,

He will whisper the breeze across your body.

Reviews

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beautiful

[Another Relic]

Very well chosen words. Your metaphors shine through. Great poem.

[Sashalee]

A really beautiful poem

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. beautiful, absolutely beautiful ...
. i used to know someone who excelled in all of that ...

[Dark Beauty]

I could get a variety of thoughts from this piece,religion,love,spiritual or something that wants to take me in a pleasurable way,very bright words,great job

[Poetic Beauty]

This seems to me as if you are talking about our creator, our God. He is vast and limitless. I love the way you describe Him in this piece and you do it without being in your face over the top about religion and what is right or wrong.

[I Cast a Shadow]

I love how bright this is. It's difficult to tell if this is religious, personal, or simply spiritual. Very nice.

[stars are far]

this was sweet nice and beautifully expressed :)

[ImagineItAll]

I always enjoy a short poem that speaks volumes. This was a beautiful write.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I've never really considered myself a very religious person, but I always find the beauty in Nature. I know something had to have created all this life, who ever it was did a great job at it. Beautifully written!