Morning Time Lovers

this poem that I wrote at some point- kind of strange I guess...

Often times-sleep with the general laughter and lovers.

They kiss the galaxy-

With wet, slips of tongue.

There we shine beaten stars.

Says the limelight.

Sour sight.

Brighten.

Difficulties.

Divide-

Amongst with myself for you and your skin.

 

Antebellum glass surrounds me with this contemporary emotion-

Shores of years of years.

Washing against me with happy beauty.

 

Morning lovers-

Eyes stare into one another’s.

See their veins.

The architecture of each others faces.

Of masks and of places we’ve been.

 

Kisses unseen from the reflections of a gravel past.

Morning Lovers.

Can see from the drunk love.

Dancing Electronica hearts.

Shifting slightly in some roads.

Busy vehicles, steer their lives.

 

The nights have disappeared

Morning lovers

Shifting with lifeless life.

Eyes opened with slivers of sight.

Tears of tiresome shudders.

Morning lovers.

Belief in believers.

Vice versa rain- morning lovers

Streaming live from a pain and a lack of it.

Moon light...

Artificial dreaming.

Morning Lovers

 

Reviews

[Chelle]

I think this one will have to be one of my favorites. I'm not entirely sure why. Although, I do quite like the elegant, dreamy, sensual, and peaceful tones you incorporated all into this whole spectrum of vivid imagery. Very nice to read actually ~

Although most of your poems have little to no interpretation, I think I was able to maybe get a little bit of meaning behind this poem. For me, it seems like the description of one having a bond with someone only in a dream, only for it to slip away once he/she awakens. That's what I get out of it. I could be wrong. But the poem was enjoyable nonetheless. Excellent ~

[JoSephMacGown]

oooh sweet! I'm glad you liked this one. Honestly it's one of my favorites of mine- it's kind of as you said, but also I had this mental image of like an elderly couple and young couple, both living in a city in my head...