The Pen Flows

The pen flows when you have something to say

Does it stop dead when the thoughts go away?

The ink on the paper is the mirror of the soul

To let people know, your story, your true feelings inside

Something so true that it will never die

That pen that flows is a magical thing

No one can tell you..... anything

Right or wrong it's your story

It's you........ and we each have our own

My pen flows a little at the moment

Makes me happy and makes me smile

To know there are bigger and better things out there

So much much to say, not so little time

Just putting it to paper

Who wants to know

Time, words, thoughts, wondering around

Its gotta be written down

Negative, positive

Whose to judge

It's your story

The pen flows :) <3

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh i like this....i like the near rhyme used, but i really love the theme...Each poet is his or own take on life and dealing with it in some way, representing.
And the harshest critics can be so damaging because they suppress the ability or really the wanting of certain poets to express themselves...they stymie what is natural and personal.
a really good write here.
it is definitely "our story"!

j.

[Amaclaire]

Thank you so much for the lovely review :) Glad you liked it, writing my poems really helped me through a bad time in my life :)

[Gee]

Enjoyed this. I still find it amazing that other people actually enjoy (sometimes) my scribbles and can be bothered to comment. Do you ever feel this way.

[Amaclaire]

thank you :) and yes I do find it amazing! it's so nice to get positive feedback and very nerving when you first put it out there.

[alan peter kelly]

Only time a pen stops spilling ink is when the well runs dry or circumstance affects a writers mind enough to block what should by rights be free in flow as all chapters in unique stories go. Enjoyed. Thank you Amaclaire.

[Amaclaire]

True :) and thank you for your positive comments :)

[alan peter kelly]

You're welcome :)