The Adventurer

One of three poems I wrote as an assignment in which I had to write a fourteen word poem with a single word per line.

His

Mind

Was

A

 Deep

Ocean

Full

Of

Thoughtful

Fish

And

Sunken

Shipwreck

Mysteries 

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

Love the set up you used and the title stuck out nicely as well. I get an image of someone sitting down chain smoking typing away on an old typewriter, old fashioned I know but it fit the feeling better than a laptop for me :) , working on finishing a giant book.

[Sarah Stephen]

A great layout followed by great words. Well done.

[Mockingbird]

i like the metaphors and the form of this poem, it gives it a whimsical element, but the message is profound. great work.

[Hotwater]

Assignment
completed...
and
very
well
too...
take a bow.

*bird*

[patrickdoromal]

simple yet astounding imagery! great write. enjoyed it.

[AmandaN]

Cleverly formed imagery. I like it.