Beneath the great unknown

This poem was inspired by a night full of stars.

There’s something special about gazing at the stars
No light pollution, city noise or cars

We smile as we get lost beneath the great unknown
No interruptions, no reception on our phone

The midnight chill dominates the air
The conversation’s steaming, feet are bare

We lie beneath the studded sky
Talking about what ifs and whys

We ponder about what the future holds
While the worlds greatest show, in front of us unfolds

Our ears are tuned into the ocean
And just like that, worry becomes a silly notion

I see the universe reflecting in your eyes
Childish, beautiful yet wise

Today we found a new dimension
A place of wonder, kindness, and intention

This moment we will forever own
A king and queen under the stars
swinging on their throne

With love, Alyana

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh, I love this! It is stunning, serene and peaceful! I couldn’t agree more with you, that a still, quiet night neath the stars is more potent with vivid life than anything electronic that buzzes and creates too much static in our lives and removes the humanity from us instead. I love that line about the childish beautiful wise look at the universe and the person you’re with. Refreshing write and perspective! Lovely!! X

[Alyana from Love Paper Pen]

Thank you for such lovely words my new friend. Means the world.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

You’re so welcome, new friend! Enjoy your evening!

[adam26]

Great rhyme scheme, and even better theme! I thought this was tied together very well. I find inspiration in similar settings.

[Alyana from Love Paper Pen]

Thank you dear