If I could write

If I could write

A Poem by Aly_Mello

If I could be a writer
If every word could make you feel
Id write about you
I'd write about how lovely you are
And how happy you make me
And I could turn my thoughts into something
Something beautiful
But I'm not
So I guess I'll have to show you
In my actions
In the way I massage your back
In the way I kiss you
In everything I do
I'll show you that I love you

© 2013 Aly_Mello


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this is a really nice sentiment. simple style gets your point across. I liked "and I could turn my thoughts into something beautiful." I think you could've repeated that again when you talked about your actions if you wanted to mirror the first part a bit, Really nice little read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


And I could turn my thoughts into something
Something beautiful
But you are a writer. And you can write him that you are and you can.
Very nice poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aly_Mello

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. c: It was my first time posting anything I've written. I don't even have anythi.. read more

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Added on December 19, 2013
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