Through all the pain, I still love you.

 

How could you do that to me?

You have no idea how hurt I am now.

It feels like my heart is bleeding, each drop of blood hitting the floor with a faint thud.

It feels like somebody has shot me in the chest, and the pain is spreading through me slowly; painfully.

It feels like a knife is being dragged along my skin, ripping the flesh leaving me to die.

Each tear drop that hits the ground leaves me breathless, and hits me with a new round of hysteria.

Each tear drop makes my stomach quiver, and my heart ache.

Each tear drop symbolizes the pain that you a making me suffer.

Its like you have thrown me in a abyss of pain, and I cant find my way out.

My face is permanently stained from a mixture of salty tears and mascara.
Now everybody will be able to see the pain that you caused me.

And can you believe that after all you have done, I still love you?

I could never stop loving you.

Even after all this pain that you have caused me, my heart shall remain yours.

Author's Note

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[poetic soul]

It feels like a knife is being dragged along my skin, ripping the flesh leaving me to die.
Each tear drop that hits the ground leaves me breathless, and hits me with a new round of hysteria.

aaah!! this pain.....leaves us to the mercy of fate!!! if you are the one narrating it, May God give you the strength to overcome this horrible incident.....great choice of words....awesome flow.....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul