Shaken.

Shaken.

A Poem by Aly
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She was seriously shaken.
Everything she saw reminded her on him.
He who had hurt he in her greatest time of need.
She had needed him;
She counted on him.
He was supposed to be her safe harbor;
But it crashed and burned.

© 2009 Aly


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Nicely done. Excellent choice of words though!

Posted 7 Years Ago
Love it! It's a simple poem, dripping with so much heart and emotion. Awesome write!

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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