HAIKU- Candle.
A Poem by Aly
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My scent fills the air
And I am slowly burning
Flickering wildly.
© 2009 Aly
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Congrats on your winning Haiku! Well done!
Author: Nancy Lee Shrader
Haiku Smiles
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Great haiku! Very original...I love the theme of it! Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!! :)
-Alaska
Posted 16 Years Ago
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What a candle would say! Nice!
Posted 16 Years Ago
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A great Haiku piece ~ THanks for sharing in the contest~FranMarie
Posted 16 Years Ago
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I like it. It paint's a candle with the candle's own voice. Syllables right on. Good Haiku!
Just Me.
Captain Ugly.
Posted 16 Years Ago
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I love it!
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Added on January 13, 2009
Last Updated on January 18, 2009
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AlyBrisbane, Australia
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Im Aly.
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Im in grade eight.
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Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :(
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