With wings.

 

With wings,

She flies to an open place,

Up in the sky

Where she couldn’t be hurt any more

She was invincible here

Strong.

Nothing could bring her down.

Nothing at all.

Not the memories of her former life,

The memories of the pain.

Nothing.

Author's Note

Critique?

Reviews

[Shellie]

This is another great short one, but can i suggest you adding another little bit to the middle...like a reflection on her pain or something. Just a thought!