Tears.

Tears.

A Poem by Aly
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He hurt her.
She was broken beyond repair.
No-one could truly see the pain that she was in.
Her face was covered by a near constant cover of tears.
Tears that ran down her mascara streaked face.

© 2009 Aly


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thoughts are nice.. but the punch is missing.. that something that strikes you right is missing... try refining it a little....

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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