The Sounds

...I don't even know what this is.

Little voices

Echo through

Failing consciousness,

Timidly speaking

Of the right thing to do.

Utter disgust

Takes over.

Author's Note

I wrote this without thinking about it, as fast as I could write the words down. I'm surprised by myself....

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Voices in my head
Telling me she deserves to be dead
I cannot take her life....
I will not kill my wife
they wont go away
They continue to say
Kill her kill her
my head begins to stir
Why do you want me to do this
I will not leave her in her own s**t and piss
I cannot take her life
She is my wife
Please get out of head
I just want to be dead


Well Kasey you have inspired me.

I guess this means I should give you a 100/100

Always,

Matthew

[Brad]

it's our mind that works without us...always be awake or asleep...this breif moment was a crossroads...

[Jong Schrijver]

This is a remarkably strange, yet fascinating piece. It kind of reminds me of a conscience.

[Alex Thomas]

The short lines emphasize the faint sound of this poem. There's excellent word choice in this poem. It almost seems like the loss of a moral compass to me.

[Kirbetsy]

This is creepy. But good. Keep writing! Your poems are excellent!

[Gianna Perry]

Oooh. Creepy. Me likey.