The Sounds

...I don't even know what this is.

Little voices

Echo through

Failing consciousness,

Timidly speaking

Of the right thing to do.

Utter disgust

Takes over.

Author's Note

I wrote this without thinking about it, as fast as I could write the words down. I'm surprised by myself....

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Voices in my head
Telling me she deserves to be dead
I cannot take her life....
I will not kill my wife
they wont go away
They continue to say
Kill her kill her
my head begins to stir
Why do you want me to do this
I will not leave her in her own s**t and piss
I cannot take her life
She is my wife
Please get out of head
I just want to be dead


Well Kasey you have inspired me.

I guess this means I should give you a 100/100

Always,

Matthew

[Loner]

Volaaaaaaa !!!
U did wonders loved it.

[HorrorMaster]

Very short and amazing.

[Syed Ali]

Really interesting.You made an impact with just a few lines. Really liked it :)

[David W Moore III]

Interesting. Tough to fathom the meaning even for you it sounds. But it makes you stop and think, and feel. That is what poetry is about.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

subconscious free flow done with exquisite depth~ these are my favorites~ wherein the poet permits the poem to write them instead of the other way around~

[Ruth]

Kudos! A fall of words that the unconscious has bestowed! Thats so cool!
xx

I think it's very good.

[Needy]

Short, but I liked it

[Amy Bumpas]

To me this poem reads that we all have those little voices
inside us, doesn't always mean we are insane LOL!
Some people may even feel shame, and that's what the
ending to me reads.

[SimplyDisastrous]

This reminds me of my poem "Depression" though it tells of something completely different. Good work, Kasey (: