Best Described As Love

The silence speaks volumes,

Under billowing plumes

Trapping quiet, still air.

Across from me sits you,

Behind me, the water so blue.

Spongy dirt supports our world.

The wind blows through your hair,

And I can't help but stare

At the dark brown curls fluttering.

Your eyes, best described as greenish gray,

Make my worries crumble and decay.

I feel safe when I'm with you.

Author's Note

About a boy... :)

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

The first stanza is quite lyrical and paints a fantastic picture. Too bad it's an exageration (not for the piece which is great but for you)

[Kasey Jones]

Yes, Jong, just a crush. He's a total jerk, but I've known him my whole life and he's cute...

This poem is an extreme exaggeration of a typical situation.

[Jong Schrijver]

Nice poem:) it's well written and I like it a lot. Kaseys got a crush:0

[Gianna Perry]

ooh lala spill those beans kasey!! do tell :)

I love this!!!

[Rosalyn Marie]

whoooooooooo!?

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delicate and romantic..lovely write