You Smell Like Summer

Old Spice, it smells so nice,

Floating in the breeze, to me.

The scent of dirt mixed with grass,

With a touch of sun,

Spreads in waves through the humid air.

You smell like life.

You smell like summer.

Author's Note

This seemed more poetic in my head....

Reviews

[Robyn]

there is something powerful about this short poem
i like it

[M.A. Van Dyke]

Lol, just yesterday, after years of using old spice, my girlfriend made me buy a different deodorant... She said it made me smell like an old man! The nerve! Haha, I like your estimation better, I think I will show this to her! I enjoy your poetry, thanks for showing it here!

[Jong Schrijver]

Very short, very good

[Crowley]

I absolutely love the title of this one...I wrote one that started with the line "Her hair smelled like the Wyoming sunshine" I love the smell of summer. This was a very perfect short and very nostalgic read for me. Nice work.