A Friend

I love my friends. :D

A friend is the sun,

Brightening up the world.

Guiding us down a path,

Twisted and twirled.

A friend is a mirror,

Gently showing you

The way you appear,

With the power to shatter

The image you drew.

A friend is the wind.

When you stand alone,

They'll whisper words of wisdom

And the world will seem more known.

Author's Note

I know the rhythm is weird...

Reviews

[Gianna Perry]

Great metaphor of friends. I think the rhythm is fine the way it is. No criticism for it. It's fantastic :D

[Rosalyn Marie]

nice :) Friend!! lol :D

[Alex Thomas]

It's an unpredictable rhythm, just like the friends we meet. We never know which friends we'll click with or how long before the mirror shatters. The rhyme is also phenomenal with words that we don't think or as rhymes, but in reality are. The last two lines are a bit long for the rest of the poem, if that's what you mean by weird.

[Kirbetsy]

I like this. It's a great summary of what a friend is.