Let's Make This Song-Worthy

Lazy days are wasted.

Life could be tasted.

Instead our dreams are lambasted.

You took my hand,

Helped me to stand,

And now you understand.

I need to get away.

Or my life will go astray.

Help me break away.

Now buy two tickets,

Don't over-think it.

We'll take this bit by bit.

Author's Note

Bleh, not my favorite. The title is my favorite part of this. I also like the last stanza....Rate and review, please.

Reviews

[Jong Schrijver]

Good poem. Plus you used my word, bleh, in the note:)

[Kirbetsy]

It's good and easily relatable. It is a bit out of rythmn but still pretty good

[Alex Thomas]

A bit out of rhythm mostly in the last line of stanza one. Not bad though. It could flow a bit better if you add a "to" before stand. It's pretty easy to relate to. Especially with the lazy days are wasted part (...on this website). Good job. An excellent effort. Something to get the ball rolling.