Trust

Hopefully this is somewhat more sophisticated than the average acrostic poem. It basically wrote itself. There was no writer's block.

Time is wasted,

     Trying to make sense of my insecurities.

Replay the scene in my mind,

     A thousand times. Convince myself it doesn't matter.

Understanding is key, but I don't understand

     Your thinking. Why are you being so 

Shallow? I thought I knew you so well.

Trust me, so I can trust you.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Nice acrostic, really great expression and intense display of emotion. I love the poems that come free of writer's block and this poem, reading it, comes free without disruption in flow/rhythm. This poem is very easy to relate to, especially with the replaying of scenes. I don't know how many times I do that even when it isn't for something intensely emotional. Well done.

[Jong Schrijver]

Great poem, sad, but true message. I love your poems!

[Mike O'Sean]

You tell such a story with words. An easy to relate to simple truth. trust is key in life. I have nothing to be critical of.

[Alex Thomas]

Some people strive so hard for sophistication, the message is blurred. This doesn't happen in your case. I really feel this poem. It's depressing. It's strong. It's honest and easy to relate to. I have no criticism for you, only praise.

[Gianna Perry]

This is really deep. And yes, it is more sophisticated than an average acrostic poem. You're lucky that this comes so naturally to you, you write some really good poetry and stories. You're also lucky about the 'no writer's block' thing, I could only wish that it was true for me too!