Rain Clouds

Rain Clouds

A Poem by Kasey Jones
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For a contest

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Clouds float with the wind.
Billowing puffs of white breath.
They destroy our peace.

© 2010 Kasey Jones


Author's Note

Kasey Jones
In the last line, "our' is pronounced as one syllable, even though it can be 2 syllables when articulated.

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very good. i only wrote 1 haiku in my life

Posted 14 Years Ago
Very nice haiku! I suck at writing haikus. 2.7!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago
Jfheh. 3%!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago
Fantastic haiku. Very descriptive for only three lines, especially the second. I really loved this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago
The comparison to breath is perfect. The descriptions are very precise to that of an actual cloud. The last line is a bit obvious and cliche. A nice haiku despite that.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Kasey Jones

The Armpit Of Massachusetts, MA



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