Winter pt. 3

Winter pt. 3

A Poem by Alpris

hot red cardigan

a creamy, breasted cuddle

wet, pink; winter soup

© 2012 Alpris


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Defiantly a hot winter happening in New Zealand. lol


Posted 12 Years Ago


Hahaha, you probably wouldn't. The only two people on here who would pick up the actual message are two of my friends who are in my class. This was inspired by Melanie when she hugged me not long ago on a cold day, and she was indeed wearing a red cardigan. However, I thank you for your kind review. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not sure that I picked up on it the first time, but you have a lovely double entendre at the end of this poem. It sounds like a very intimate and steamy winter evening. A perfect night for "wet, pink; winter soup" indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Alpris

Auckland, New Zealand



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