I Hate Flies

a

fly flew past

and flicked

my fluttering

lids of flu

fiery flare

through sun washed

air

flapped away

away

dead


phew.

Reviews

[Emma Berman]

hmm... i like poetry that isnt tacky and too wordy

you made a lot out of a little

[Wakeofahero]

Hahaha this is so uniquely different/odd/funny in a sense. I liked reading this alot, altogether thought that it was pretty good!