do you see i see all

see,
   the sun rising is a sin 
            see, 
           the moon glowing is a prayer
                      see, 
                          the light shining is a fake
                                 see, 
                                              the people walking are all dead
                                             see, 
                                                       the rain pissing down is all poisoned
                                                        
                                see ;
                     icicles melt before you know what they're for

                 see, i can see perfectly fine the silver lining   -   it's as blunt as a balloon

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[Pól]

as blunt as a balloon- I suppose they are

Nice piece