Day & Night

my my...
the sun is charming
today


its rays
flirt with me


my feet are
bathing in


the sun's urine
across hot cocoa
carpets


my sister,
a flushed curtain


she likes to
hiss unnecessary
night on me


perhaps she should
try drowning


in the sun's urine
                            too.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Don't let the negative people bring you down, instead flood them with love. Excellent poem.

[Alpris]

Nah, this poem was supposed to inflict positivity and how I flick negativity to the side all the while enjoying a sun which is a metaphor for the many plus' in my life. Cheers, dude.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is exactly what I was saying, I totally got it.