A Bite from the Apple of Corruption

You figure it out

We desired to survive.

  To live.

To adapt.

We desired to come together.

We desired to love each other.

We desired to advance further.

We desired to hurt no more,

to never have another lie spoken to our faces.

We desired to be the change,

to strive for what we want without encountering failure.

To burn brighter than the whitest snow on a sun filled day.

To go on past the limits of what is known to be possible.

To reach higher than we can ever hope to achieve.

To be acknowledged by all, with our names carved in stone.

We desired to rebel.

To take over.

To revolt.

We desired for power,

with the need for more.

We desired to never fall.

But in the end,

we lost it all.

Reviews

[Oh Oh Oh no]

That rhyming game is strong homie. Your spacing was pretty cool, it goes with the story. I dunno what you should work on, maybe like make it more intense

[crybabykylie]

this is AMAZING! so good i love the imagery gave me cold chills with the last 3 lines