My Monster

My monster eats away,

As I struggle to cope, day to day,

life used to be great

for now, all I smell is hate

fate frankly, has closed it's gate

My monster, he will not wait

chewing my life piece by piece

wreaking havoc on my sleep

shall I cry and become lost,

shall I die and become found

shall the world help me out

shall the earth, close it's mouth

tick tock, tick...

I'm starting to drown, I guess this is it.

Reviews

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

I´m sorry your depression is making you drown. Try to keep your head above water before chistmas ok?

[Tony Jordan]

*offers hand to Alonzo*
please swim...
no drowning before Xmas my friend...

[Alonzo]

I will :) Thank you Tony.