You're Gone

Even though you're gone,

I feel you all around.

I think about you constantly,

But still, you stand your ground.

 

I cry now, all the time,

It's hard for me to breathe.

You shattered my existence,

And then decide to leave.

 

So I'm left here all alone,

Going over my mistakes.

I trusted you and was betrayed,

And now you watch as my heart breaks.

 

For me, you have no sympathy,

You don't care that I'm in pain.

I tried to make you stay with me,

But all my efforts were in vain.

Reviews

[We are young.]

Very relatable isn't is for every girl? lol

[deeps]

I really like this one alot,
I can feel this one, I've been there so many times I lost count.
Amazing write, wonderful flow!

[Laura Ex]

i'm digging the rhyme scheme in this. very nice job. the colors are pretty snazzy too. ;P this really captures the essence of heartbreak.