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A Chapter by Alone In A Crowd
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The first chapter in Papers (still thinking of a better name.) Set in London just before the outbreak of WW1.

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“Papers! Get your newspaper! Only a shilling! You there Madame, have you heard the latest about the young woman who chained herself to government gates? Read all about it here!” London was waking up and opening a tired eye as business men began out of their homes, and scruffy children were sent to collect fruit from the market. The city’s atmosphere of urgency and optimism in equal measures started turning the usual clockwork of the working day. Great looming grey towers rose up from the ground, like trees from soil and glazed the hazy morning light with reflections and refractions of beams and rays of sunlight from windows and glass. Street sides were littered with shops: Bakeries, butchers, fabric shops selling soft, comforting cotton sheets and the finest of green silk. The early morning scent, of brittle specks of rust, mixed with frost shrouded the air and weighed down heavy on morning commuters. Dawn was just breaking, but London was already awake- beckoning the day to catch up with its eagerness, so the city can begin its familiar routine, like always.                                      London is a bustling place; filled with every aspect of a major location. Everyone here has aspirations, even if it’s the simplest need of an alcoholic for another shot of whisky. Everybody seems to be drawn to London, for the hopes it offers them; people from all different social levels and wealth, or lack of, wants to be here.  The beautiful actresses, singing theatre stars, even budding government members of high rankings from country shires all turn up to visit London- there is always something new to see. And for the last 7 years the main attraction and local hot point has been Donoghues department store. Women crave the newest fashion designs here, seeming to flock, after a telepathic message has been sent to them, in front of the doors before opening times, determined to be victorious and own the single most desirable accessory out there.          1914 is the year things are changing for not only Donoghues, but London, Great Britain and Europe entirely.  “I’m signing up when the war breaks” or “It’s only a matter of time now” people keep saying to their friends and family. Utterly proud, their loved ones are elated that their sons, brothers, husbands, uncles or cousins are joining the war effort. Thinking that they’re going to be so lucky- getting the opportunity to travel, fight the enemy, gain some medals and come home and suddenly be welcoming all of the attention from the women; all while doing their part for Great Britain. The air is filled with anxiety and slight patient torment.                                   Considering it’s only a few weeks after Christmas the roads are extremely busy once more, there’s yelling from journalists, seeming to be around every corner looking for a story. Laughter of teenagers and children breaking through the air and their innocent voices linger on the ears of everyone. Although, perhaps not as out of the ordinary is the hustle of the below streets- where poverty thrives.  The daily routine of hunger, disease and living on the brink of society, mixed in so delicately with people of power and authority, begins again. Yet, the children who run around covered in dirt and dried mud caked on their skin, are still happy. They’ve never known anything besides the life they’re living, and don’t realise what they’re missing out on. It’s just the adults and parents of these children who all seem to understand how children will have to cope with the looks and whispers from others. The sad glimmer glazed across their fragile eyes, their delicate hands that tend to their children’s cuts and bruises as best they can, are worn and weathered after years of selling, cleaning, polishing and doing everything they can to earn some money to support themselves and their families. Just to be able to feed their children, often hungry themselves- know that the young and the elderly are still very weak and won’t be able to gain any strength on the poor diet they’re forced to abide by. The average passer by won’t notice how their words quaver as these paupers are subjected to stand up to the remarks that are being thrown at them with such hatred. How the apparently ‘gentlemanly’ praised men can steer well clear, but yet abuse the women here whenever they feel the urge, slapping them and bounding them for their own sick sexual fantasies. Leaving behind a few coins for their services, and going home to their wives and children, all while forcing these women to keep an unspoken, but blatantly obvious law: ‘You do not mention what the scumbags do to you, because they can always do worse.’ Perhaps if one of the below street women are overheard, one day a child is briskly swept up from the area- that child doesn’t have a home so nobody realises for hours, but when they do, nothing can be done to find the child. They’ve suddenly ended up in an orphanage. Placed there by the ‘gentleman’ who his mother served, to try and send her child to school; no one will ask questions because of course, there’s another unspoken law.                                     “Adaline! Adaline!” called an elderly gentleman, who was sitting in the gutter of one of the below streets. Like a below surface network of stalls and stands the streets were curved and bent to produce a winding passageway, road shape. Except nobody down here can afford a vehicle, so the ‘road’ is just a large pathway etched with hurried people, sorting out all of their stock and arranging it accordingly. A slowly diving pathway around 4 metres wide stoops into the maze of streets- levelling off some 2 and a half metres in height below the rest of the city.                                   “Adaline!” the man called again, his crooked hand raised in the air, as if summoning her to his side. He sounded frail and feeble, coughing when she stopped and turned around to face him; the effort it took for this weak, white haired man to even whisper was too much, let alone raise his voice.                                     This time she heard him and walked across to greet the man. Her dark brunette hair smoothly pinned up loosely to her head, with a deep ivy colour rounded, capeline hat placed on the top of her hair- slightly leaning on her right. The black ribbon wrapped around her hat, coordinated with her long dark skirts and matching bodice, swishing gently as she stepped briskly over.              “Hello George, what can I help you with?” There was gleefulness in Adaline's voice. Even though she hated being called Adaline, demanding when she was young that no one refer to her as this. Though, the pushed back the resentment for the name when one of the elderly people use it, because she adored them so- if not taking pity on them. After all when she was a child they were her support system.                                  “I haven’t seen you around here much lately and was just a bit concerned” enquiry in his tone.                                               “I know I’m sorry, it’s just that I’ve been trying to get those job interviews completed at Donoghues. I think I might actually have a shot” she said along with a nervous laugh with partial urgency and partial forced light heartedness.                                                     Brought up here, George knows how determined Adaline can be, especially when it comes to changing the way she and her makeshift family lives. Altering an ever changing persona to people she does not yet know fully; worried that if they knew her background her chances of being accepted- both physically and socially may be hindered.                                                 “You’ve always been so intent on following your heart dear, that maybe you’re beginning to forget your old life here. I know that you wouldn’t purposely do that, but sometimes please try to slow down a bit and just say hello every now and then?” George proposed softly.                                   “I’d never forget this place George it’s the closest thing I have to a home, and how about if I pop back after work yeah? It’s been too long since I’ve had a proper catch up with everyone here.” Noticing the steady flow of workers that had been entering Donoghues’ large spinning glass doors up and across the street begin to slow and come to a stop, Adaline realised that now she was pretty late. “Sorry, but I’ve really got to get to work, I’m already late, so I’ll see you later on” raising her voice gradually as she backed away from George hurriedly.                                “Alright Adaline, I hope to see you then my dear” George called after her.                                   Waving a hand behind her Adaline began a brisk skip- step type routine to attempt to get to work through the masses of people on the street. Her hands seem to attack the air as they moved in floundering movements, while she was stating “Excuse me. I’m sorry Sir, excuse me” on a loop.     Children and adults alike recognised her and greeted her with “Fay, how are you?”, “Long time no see, Fay” shouted one middle-aged gentleman and several children called her name on repeat “Fay! Fay! Fay!”                                               Although she was in a rush Adaline was visibly pleased that she was being called by her preferred name again and gleefully returned kind words, smiling and laughing as she glided past them. Once she’d reached the higher street again Fay was almost running; she could see the massive department store edging closer and her new reputation at Donoghues quickly following on her heels. Skirting around important looking men with top hats gripping briefcases and careering past mothers with prams, she was very nearly there. Clutching her hat desperately onto her head she maneuvered the final surge of people- darting through them after deliberating a while; not noticing before she took her chance that there was someone on the other side…And she fell right into him.                                                              “I’m so sorry Sir... I was just trying… You see…” Fay was completed flustered; aggravated by the misfortune of being late; and then even more late. As she bent down to help pick up all of the fallen pieces of paper the gentleman was holding in his hands, still not looking up she understood that even though she was going to get questioned by Mr. Cronin (head of staff) that this man had done nothing to have some frantic young lady crash into him. She understood that this was her fault and she shouldn’t blame him.                                 “It’s quite alright, there’s no need to be sorry. I shouldn’t of stepped out right in front of you like that” said a soft French voice full of concern. Tall, dark and handsome in a stylish deep chocolate coloured waistcoat and dark blazer he began to stand up straight again.          Realising she recognised who this man is Fay backed away tentatively. She’d just rushed into the head of design and windows. Like  being a top student at 15 in school and then getting a little tipsy and loud at a bar one evening, spilling out of the club and coming face to face with the schools headmaster, that type of deadly embarrassment and agony.                                “I’m sorry Sir, I didn’t mean to assault you with my flailing arms” Fay dared a slight schoolgirl smile “ And I didn’t mean to be late, it was just I got a little caught up in something- but there’s no excuse for my tardiness and I’m extremely apologetic.”                                        “Adaline right?” spoke the gentleman.                                      “Yes, Sir” Fay said as she instinctively lowered her head in disgrace.                “I’m Henri, I’ve seen you around the store Adaline, and noticed your sketchbook on a chair in storage every now and then when I look for supplies.” Informed Henri, his name pronounced with a missing H at the start, aligning the fallen papers in his hands.                           “Sir, I know I shouldn’t leave it down there, it’s just I don’t really believe I can leave by the counter, in case someone found it, I won’t leave it in storage again, I’m sorry” Rambled Fay, surprised and feeling slightly violated that Henri had looked through her drawings- her own version of a journal, almost wanting to rush the conversation because she was aware of the numerous shades of red Fay’s cheeks had just deepened.                                            “Adaline, please, don’t worry” he cut her off. “They’re good drawings, you have a talent” His French accent adamant.           “Huh, what? Thank you Sir, but shouldn’t you be telling me to not do it again or rethink the way I’m going about things, or else I’ll end up having my last conversation with Mr. Donoghue  quicker than I thought?” Fay said with declaration, trying to achieve the perfect strict tone, although failing slightly to sound a bit humorous.                          “Probably I should be; instead how about you help me out with my Forget me not window? Have you ever used a camera before Adaline?” Turning his posture toward the great glass doors Henri implied they enter the department store. Shocked beyond comment Fay followed Henri’s lead.



© 2014 Alone In A Crowd


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Alone In A Crowd
This is my first chapter to 'Papers' and any and all feedback is gladly accepted. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.

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Hi, I'm 15 and live in the United Kingdom. I started writing after my English teacher began helping me cope with the things I'm going through. I definately prefer poems and trying to add meaning to th.. more..

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