Eyes

Stare in the face of horror,
Be brave.
Explore their eyes;
Find the lurking untruth.

Author's Note

I know it's short and not one of my best. It only took me a few seconds to think up, so it's pretty bad. Although thank you for reading and reviewing anyway.

Reviews

[Denise]

not bad. don't accuse something short as being bad. Short, yet honest, and direct. simplicity can be a good thing.

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thank you for reviewing.

[Blue Belle]

Why find the untruth and not the truth? I do like this poem however because of its simplicity and choice of words. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thank you, find the untruth beacuse it's always there; usually harder to discover and more interesting or painful when you do, so find that firdt and you know where you stand. Thanks for your review.

[Blue Belle]

Different way at looking at situations.

[Cool Handless Luke]

lol. It's not bad at all. I write stuff and then refine it and rewrite it all the time because I keep finding things that don't seem right to me or could maybe be better. I wrote a poem called "it's just me" from a different perspective. It's raw and vulgar in spots but this one reminded me of that.

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thank you, and I'll be looking up your poem.

[Cool Handless Luke]

cool. hope you don't find it too offensive.