Perfection

This is for all the people that want that special someone they cant have but dream about.

Fix every piece and glue it all up,

after a ray of light it all melts and falls apart.

Just because I sell myself short.

Doesn't mean I cant have what I want.

The smile you make so gorgeous and bright,

I feel like ice in the summer melting just thinking of your'e hearts delight.

So please come onto me like a bee to a flower.

Take away my pain an guilt.

Your'e my deepest happiness,

inside my cold lonely heart.

Reviews

[Pax]

Its all nice
but i see the wrong spelling of you're not your'e .. or did you did that on purpose...
also this: take away my pain an guilt or is it take away my pain and guilt...or you also did you did that on purpose...

[S. Michael Long]

i love this! i have a poem called perfection too, and i think they are a lot alike, at least when it comes to the ultimate meaning or purpose of the poem! Nice work! -s