Alone

My heart was just broken.

My heart is broken,

You said you could fix it.

But then as you lie to my face I trust every word.

Never have I been so sad and alone.

I thought I loved you but then I have a feeling in my heart,

All I feel now is the cold embrace you give .

Sometimes I ask god,

Will I always be alone?

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

i love the play on lye and lie.. in the 3rd stanza.. i expected lye.. but you used lie.. it brings a whole new aspect to the poem that i did not expect. Very nice! -s

[Tara Ghorm]

Aw! I'd hug you, but I can't over the interwebs...
You really shared a lot of emotion through this. Me and Geki are on the phone trying to decipher it. He's an idiot.