Nothing just Hate

I just got on and made my first poem please if you want say it sucked or if you liked it. And tell me if I need work I think I need alot.

Alone and scared, Nothing to do.

Look in my heart a shell and all you see is you,

A reflection in side myself that leads to nothing, Just more hate.

The one thing in side I feel please oh god help me.

 

Author's Note

This is my first.

Reviews

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

hate is awsome but love is better

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

i thoght it to be very good, you keep going....just write what your feel....you cant go wrong! x0x0x0x0

[she who must not be nam..]

Yes, I know it's your first, but it's good. (In other words, I liked it) Although (if you look on my profile, you'll see that I said that hate was a strong word... but that's the point! I think... ANYWAYS, I think you should work on some longer poems. Yeah, that's about it... I think... See, I can't really make up my mind...