Songs of Sorrow

Songs of Sorrow

A Poem by Alondra Parra

Singing softly, songs of sorrow
Hoping for a bright tomorrow
Sighing, knowing its not coming
Crying, weeping for its showing
Missing deeply, loving wholly
Wishing yet remaining lonely
Falling, breaking into pieces
And her heart to beat, it ceases

© 2013 Alondra Parra


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Alondra Parra
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Wow, that's really good. "songs of sorrow Hoping for a bright tomorrow." So beautiful. This poem makes me want to cry wow. That is just, so good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on June 23, 2013
Last Updated on July 8, 2013
Tags: Crying, lonely, loving, love, singing, songs, depressing, sad

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Alondra Parra
Alondra Parra

Denver, CO



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I love writing. I take criticism kindly. Just trying to become a better writer. I'm fun and outgoing and I love to read(: Listen to Post-Hardcore and Alternative music more than anything else! Blue an.. more..

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