Choking

A Poem by Alondra Parra

The thing with love
It comes and holds you as you unravel
In it; The hold shifts
Into an uncomfortable vice grip
That tightens
Until not a single breath
May try to slip in
Love kills

© 2013 Alondra Parra

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Too simple? Boring? Let me know! I love feedback!

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Added on June 23, 2013
Last Updated on July 8, 2013
Tags: Love, chokes, kills, depressing, no love, sad

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Alondra Parra

Denver, CO

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I love writing. I take criticism kindly. Just trying to become a better writer. I'm fun and outgoing and I love to read(: Listen to Post-Hardcore and Alternative music more than anything else! Blue an.. more..

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