Wondang (Light)

I want to meet the sun on the  highway on a freezing cold winter morning and let the first light  burn and melt the cold of yesterday away...

I want to find myself on a deserted road, on a mid summer afternoon and lie down right in the middle for the joy of having it my way...

I want to spent a night by a lake alone in the woods  just with my thoughts and the stars far away and taste the feel of heaven near...

I want to beheld the orangey red skies on a mountain top and feel the cool wind caress my face and hear the last song of the trees ...

i want to be found in a library with the smell of old classics and hot chocolate, by the window on a  cold rainy afternoon... 

... but all these fall short of the bliss i get when I am in your arms...

for that's where i feel everything altogether...

and that's where I am safe.

Author's Note

..still working on it besides my hectic schedule. Do drop in your constructive criticisms ^-^

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful journey leading to perfect ending.
"but all these fall short of the bliss i get when I am in your arms...
for that's where i feel everything altogether...
and that's where I am safe."
Safe and content. A perfect place. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Zoe Naga]

Thank you Coyote. You are very kind. And thank you for your encouragement!

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. I liked the longing in the words.
"but all these fall short of the bliss i get when I am in your arms...
for that's where i feel everything altogether...
and that's where I am safe."
To be warm and safe. A good place to know. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful, lovely piece!
Aspirations, dreams and brewing life.
An awesome write penned with an strong urge to fly.
Enjoyed the end and the imagery very much!
Kudos!

[Zoe Naga]

Thank you Jyoti. You are very kind!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Eternal Devotion]

I adored this poem. It shows such a powerful need for separation and time to be at one with yourself but how that all means nothing compared to being with the one you love. Brill

[Zoe Naga]

Thank you so much Amy. I really apperciate the time you took to read this piece and for your kind words.