Enlighten Me, Orpheus

Will you follow me to the land of death?

Will you take my hand when I'm in pain?

Will you blindly guide me to where it rains

golden sun drops.

Will you be my Orpheus?

Search for me?

Never give up?

Or will you leave me..

Orpheus?

Are you here to save me?

Is this death over?

Don't look back,

don't take me for granted.

Look back once,

and I'll be gone.

 

Author's Note

This one might be rough. Any comments are appreciated!

Reviews

[Chris]

The third part doesn't really align... could more readily be its own standalone poem.