Hollow

This is just kind of how some people make me feel if I'm around them to long.

You've drained me like a maple tree
No longer sweet
Nothing left to offer
Hollow inside
With a giant hole of where you once were
My leaves have died
My roots have withered
My heart is broken

Reviews

[LightforChrist]

I really like this poem, the amount of imagery you use in this poem to describe your heartfelt emotion is truly amazing! Great job and keep writing! :)

[Ranger Nadaly]

The comparison of a person heart broken to a dying tree is really sweet and passionate. Its graciously written, I think its good. Not something I would like to read often-sad poems can get tiring. But I think this is good.

[Laminators Dubai]

metaphrasis placed just right words works well. simplicity is all.
really liked it
thanks for sharing...