Summers end

I was Curly Wolf in Nevada City with my sister when I wrote this.

I sit in this coffee shop late at night
Grasping at the ends of my summer
The weather cooling down
The tan fading
I sit here in a sleeveless shirt
And my jeans
Realizing to late
That Fall snuck up on me
I feel a shiver and put on a sweater

Reviews

[bobc]

Yes...that's the way summers are. Start too late and end too soon. And I disagree strongly with the 'but no feelings' comment below. Feelings can be more pastel and this is like that...thanx...bobc

[Im His Daughter]

quick writes can be the best ones to read & grab a persons heart.. good job.

[Ally Baldwin]

Thank you:)

[zainul]

Very vivid write.
Shared your weather with readers worldwide.
Amazing sentence:
"I feel a shiver and put on a sweater"

[Ally Baldwin]

Thanks :) it was just a quick write for a friend of mine.

[zainul]

Welcome.
Quick write but filled with friendly warmth.