my best friend

my best friend

A Poem by Ally Baldwin
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her name was Callie and she broke my heart.

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you broke my heart
you broke my trust
you gave up
you lied
but
I forgive you
I know you're not sorry
I know you hate me
I know what you think
but
I forgive you anyway. 

© 2013 Ally Baldwin


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Loved it :) It shows so much strength that despite what she did you forgave her.
Well written :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ally - you must add more emotions to this poetry. I loved this one but you could have added some more feelings and that would really make it best. I did really like it.
Will create something like this sooner. Thanks for inspiring :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


one thing we have to remember is everyone at some time will fail us, let us down, We put all our trust in a person & when they do let us down we are crushed, like putting all our eggs in one basket & trusting that friend to carry them through a busy, crazy, insane wrecking yard to the market for us.. Everyone will eventually let us done the key is forgiveness. This is a great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ally Baldwin

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much that means a lot to me:)

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Added on August 18, 2013
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Tags: friendship, broken heart, forgiveness

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