Ally - you must add more emotions to this poetry. I loved this one but you could have added some more feelings and that would really make it best. I did really like it.
Will create something like this sooner. Thanks for inspiring :)
- Singh :)
one thing we have to remember is everyone at some time will fail us, let us down, We put all our trust in a person & when they do let us down we are crushed, like putting all our eggs in one basket & trusting that friend to carry them through a busy, crazy, insane wrecking yard to the market for us.. Everyone will eventually let us done the key is forgiveness. This is a great write!