Infinite

Infinite

A Poem by Ally Baldwin
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I was reading a short story my friend wrote and it inspired me to write this

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Grab my hand and we can run
We can run far away
Far away from this madness
This madness that will kill our love
Our love is infinite
Infinite amount of days till I can leave
I can leave with you

© 2013 Ally Baldwin


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i love to go with the sound and than this poem is more intereting for me its that leave is like lets get out of here or leave is like spend my whole life with you
both will work well

really sweet rom thanks for sharing...
keep going...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Last line 3 word made me confused - leave
do you mean live with you?
I hope that makes sense :)
Remaining this poem is really wonderful and catchy :)
Ally - Great work :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ally Baldwin

11 Years Ago

I meant leave because they wanted to leave they're old live behind and travel.
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Ohk no worries ;) if you know what's correct then no issues :)

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Added on August 18, 2013
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