Every boy I've ever dated

Every boy I've ever dated

A Poem by Ally Baldwin
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This kind of cliché a poem about boys but whatever.

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The way you look at me is not the way I look at you
You say I'm pretty, cute and, adorable I say Ok
I think you're sweet I think nothing else
These feelings you have I can't return.
I can't give you your money back.
So leave I feel like I'm broken and unloveable so stop your trying
I don't want to break your heart
Go, go GO away and find your girl because she's not here.
And I've got nothing else to say I've ran out of Sorry's for you
I'll I've got is an empty goodbye..

© 2013 Ally Baldwin


Author's Note

Ally Baldwin
It's better preformed than read..

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Posted 11 Years Ago


I would definitely agree that it would sound better preformed than read. The amount of emotion and imagery that are present throughout this poem are so beautiful. Wonderful job and I look forward to reading more of your work! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes true definitely performed and i know exactly what you mean. Love the emotions and pain that blotted this poem. Good job and keep writing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 18, 2013
Last Updated on August 20, 2013
Tags: Spoken word, relationships, boys, romance

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Ally Baldwin
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15 years old, freshman, sarcastic. more..

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