My Love

My Love

A Poem by Ally

All the stars in the sky
can never compare to the number of times
my weary mind conjures up 
that image of your smiling eyes
lighting up my very soul and mind
won’t you always be mine?
Your smile and your kiss
the whispers that come from your lips
are like the rustling of the leaves
on a nearby tree
like seeing the bloom of a long awaited flower
watching it grow with all of its power
Like the shooting of a star sky high
being seen by a passerby
it is the little things in life
my love
that make you so dear to me
please my love, won’t you stay with me?
I no longer have to watch for shooting stars
you are the one I have been looking for
show me what it means to love once more
God knew you were the missing piece
of the rest of my life that is meant to be
It is you that completes me
my love
Forever more we shall be.

© 2015 Ally


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This first stanza is the prelude to a beautiful dance of hearts Ally
I love the simplicity and the sincerity of this - could love be any more easy - should love be any more complicated - No on both counts
A big YES to this though
Thanks Ally for this gliding waltz to tango to lovers clinch - brilliant

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very beautiful, sweet and enchanting :) Lovely write Ally

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely wonderful, loved this write, thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This first stanza is the prelude to a beautiful dance of hearts Ally
I love the simplicity and the sincerity of this - could love be any more easy - should love be any more complicated - No on both counts
A big YES to this though
Thanks Ally for this gliding waltz to tango to lovers clinch - brilliant

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely astounding!
I loved the flow and great emotion put into it!
Keep up the great work Ally!

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much!!! :)
C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :)

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Added on January 10, 2015
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Ally
Ally

Charlotte, NC



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