Simple truth

Beauty and grace

has no face

Sadness and sorrow

will find you tomorrow

Hell and death 

will lock you in a cell

Giving and forgiving

is a healthy way of living

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"Giving and forgiving
is a healthy way of living" How true.

Kinda peaceful and inspirationally eye-catching poetry. Loved reading it!

[Prince Bonsu]

very nice, deep and short piece. me love!

[Ally]

Thankyou so much!

[Ghost of Jupiter]

A simple truth that we should all live by... BUT Why is it so hard to do sometimes... That forgiving part seems to baffle some, me included, lol. I love this positive piece that pacts so much wisdom in a few words.

[Ally]

Aw thank you so much! And yeah, even though forgiving is the positive note in this poem, it is in fact the hardest to do. Thank you for noticing!

[Jamie]

Short and powerful! Great piece of work and a great read!

[Ally]

Thank you so much!

[Jamie]

you are welcome! Feel free to review my stuff :)

[Gee]

Simple truth,nice simple,easy to understand write.Did you purposely write"hell and death" instead of "death and hell"as this broke up the rhyming flow?

[Ally]

hahaha you, I would like to say that I did it on purpose, but I didn't, but thats ok, you learn from your mistakes right?

[Gee]

We do indeed.Take care

[Kuldeep desai]

Woow.....great u have built ur poem like an small army but with strong deeds......it doesn't matter how small it is or presence of any grammatical errors,,,,,,,,,,, if a poem touches the heart how bad it can be........

[Ally]

Thank you so much!:)

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

LOVE it, right up my alley reflecting how life can be grim and dark, OR positive and light, happiness wins again, YAY. Great work, a lot said in such few lines.

[Ally]

Thankyou so much! I really appreciate it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"giving and forgiving"

that is the answer, the key to inner peace.

nicely expressed,

welcome to Writerscafe.

jacob

[Ally]

Thank you so much!

[anant mody]

cccoooll

but put some.positivity alsoo misss:-):-):-)

[Chris]

...and so you've begun. Welcome to WC.

Take your time and find your balance.

[Ally]

Thank you! And I will:)