"Freedom is as freedom was , we sing it all the time"
you words sir, is really relaxing...
the feeling on it is quite beautiful...
like what I've learned happiness is a choice...
so no matter what, you can still chose to be happy
even in the smallest bit, you'll feel glad if you chose to...
I love the patriotic feel to this and the message of love for our fellow man that this
eloquent write has given me. I think the answer to every riddle to world peace and happy existence with each other as a whole, is all within these lines you have penned for us.
Well Mr S - I'm game if you are (insert 'pheasant' joke) - parasailing? Skydiving? And any other road to freedom? Much happiness to you, wherever you may find it -x-
Beautiful Allen, I love the line, "Love may come it often goes, but can we be without" how fitting, and how right this is. Love is very important in our lives, along with happiness and peace and equality. Your writing reminds us of these special gifts that are free for us to give and receive, and the beauty of this fact.
Excellent write as always.> excellent structure as well
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..