Endless Journey

Endless Journey

A Poem by Allen Smuckler




















Concrete minds, abstract lives,

master of your fate.

The tired man at last arrives,

while you just sit and wait...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
1.4.73 (European)
(April 1, 1973)
Brussels
Photo: Ringling Bros. Museum
Sarasota, FL (Feb. 28. 2012

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just one word for this- splendid!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


this reminds me of my brothers son after graduating college and getting ready for grad school I need a break he kept saying

Posted 12 Years Ago


... eternally simple and profound Mr S ;) -X-

Posted 12 Years Ago


Just made this a favorite. Simplicity at it's best!


Posted 12 Years Ago


this brought to mind that so many times we are sitting waiting for things to happen not realizing it takes some doing ...thats my interpretation ...another wondeful and thougth provoking poem. Love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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lei
short but very powerful.. i like short poems and this one is really really good...

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is like a puzzle that one has to think upon a piece it together. So much meaning in simple lines.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmm... I like your style. It makes my brain think.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how your words capture perfectly the scene in the picture.. That's why I like using art with poetry.. I like the visual along with the words..xo :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really a nice pick of words.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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