Burnt Bottom Cookies

Burnt Bottom Cookies

A Poem by Allen Smuckler
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MMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmMMMMMMMM!!!!!

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                        Burnt Bottom Cookies



























Sitting ‘round the breakfast bar

four women fresh from lunch.

I bound upstairs from afar

thoughts of what I’d munch.


Sure I thought, a peach or pear

perhaps a tangerine…

           

I said to all those in a row,

I’m starved beyond repair.

 

That pang I feel within my gut

is not my missing hair.

I want, I need, I have a hunch.

can’t anybody share?

 

Some burnt bottom cookies

the  girls exclaimed!!!

Chocolate chip or oatmeal,

the choice is surely yours.

 

Now, I like muffin tops

and love pistachios

any kind of fruit or wine

and always chocolate.

 

But burnt bottom cookies?

mmmm!! So tasty and devine.                      

Helped launch me into orbit,

and made my day so fine...

 

 

© 2012 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
I just love 'em...what can I say.
just for fun...
mmmMMMmmm!!!

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Cruel! So cruel!....*tummy growls* WAAAAH! I have no food right now!!!!!! UGH! Can't bear the sight of a cookie!

MOM: Are you hungry?
ME: *gasps dramatically and swivels around*....always.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i hate burnt cookies But i love chocolate i can ignore the burnt for that .

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shame on you. I could almost SMELL them, especially with that pic! Awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this made me hungry

Posted 12 Years Ago


If you love burnt bottom cookies...just wait till you try the unburnt version! But maybe those ladies won't share the unburnt ones with you? You might have to bake your own. Actually, I think I'd take cookies anyway I could get them - especially if they had chocolate in them!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha. This is hilarious. At first, I read the title and I burst out in a fit of giggles, and then I read the actual poem and I was laughing my head off. This is AWESOME!!! (true, burnt bottom cookies ARE yummy)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks Emma, for stopping by for a taste...
I always enjoy hearing from you...
and appreciate your comments and reactions
allen

Posted 12 Years Ago


Laughing, yes, really am .. some men will keep a woman talking just for those burned bits! Some fun metre, some great pics in the process .. many thanks for the giggles!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

much enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a cute fun write, I like peanut butter cookies,
just a little burnt, this is wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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