Burnt Bottom Cookies
A Poem by
Allen Smuckler
MMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmMMMMMMMM!!!!!
Burnt Bottom Cookies
Sitting ‘round the breakfast bar
four women fresh from
lunch.
I bound upstairs from afar
thoughts of what I’d
munch.
Sure I thought, a
peach or pear
perhaps a tangerine…
I said to all those in
a row,
I’m starved beyond
repair.
That pang I feel
within my gut
is not my missing
hair.
I want, I need, I have
a hunch.
can’t anybody share?
Some burnt bottom
cookies
the girls exclaimed!!!
Chocolate chip or
oatmeal,
the choice is surely
yours.
Now, I like muffin
tops
and love pistachios
any kind of fruit or
wine
and always chocolate.
But burnt bottom
cookies?
mmmm!! So tasty and
devine.
Helped launch me into
orbit,
and made my day so
fine...
© 2012 Allen Smuckler
Author's Note
I just love 'em...what can I say.
just for fun...
mmmMMMmmm!!!
Reviews
Cruel! So cruel!....*tummy growls* WAAAAH! I have no food right now!!!!!! UGH! Can't bear the sight of a cookie!
MOM: Are you hungry?
ME: *gasps dramatically and swivels around*....always.
Posted 12 Years Ago
i hate burnt cookies But i love chocolate i can ignore the burnt for that .
Posted 12 Years Ago
i hate burnt cookies But i love chocolate i can ignore the burnt for that .
Shame on you. I could almost SMELL them, especially with that pic! Awesome!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Shame on you. I could almost SMELL them, especially with that pic! Awesome!
this made me hungry
Posted 12 Years Ago
this made me hungry
If you love burnt bottom cookies...just wait till you try the unburnt version! But maybe those ladies won't share the unburnt ones with you? You might have to bake your own. Actually, I think I'd take cookies anyway I could get them - especially if they had chocolate in them!
Posted 12 Years Ago
If you love burnt bottom cookies...just wait till you try the unburnt version! But maybe those ladies won't share the unburnt ones with you? You might have to bake your own. Actually, I think I'd take cookies anyway I could get them - especially if they had chocolate in them!
Haha. This is hilarious. At first, I read the title and I burst out in a fit of giggles, and then I read the actual poem and I was laughing my head off. This is AWESOME!!! (true, burnt bottom cookies ARE yummy)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Haha. This is hilarious. At first, I read the title and I burst out in a fit of giggles, and then I read the actual poem and I was laughing my head off. This is AWESOME!!! (true, burnt bottom cookies ARE yummy)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Thanks Emma, for stopping by for a taste...
I always enjoy hearing from you...
and appreciate your comments and reactions
allen
Posted 12 Years Ago
Thanks Emma, for stopping by for a taste...
I always enjoy hearing from you...
and appreciate your comments and reactions
allen
Laughing, yes, really am .. some men will keep a woman talking just for those burned bits! Some fun metre, some great pics in the process .. many thanks for the giggles!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Laughing, yes, really am .. some men will keep a woman talking just for those burned bits! Some fun metre, some great pics in the process .. many thanks for the giggles!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
much enjoyed.
Posted 12 Years Ago
much enjoyed.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Such a cute fun write, I like peanut butter cookies,
just a little burnt, this is wonderful.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Such a cute fun write, I like peanut butter cookies,
just a little burnt, this is wonderful.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 22, 2012
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Allen Smuckler Sarasota, FL
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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin..
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