Chapter 2 - (Trains, Recollections and other Memories)

Chapter 2 - (Trains, Recollections and other Memories)

A Chapter by Allen Smuckler

                      

 

         “The Train is leaving, last call to get on,

    last call for adventure, last call for the rest of your life.”

                                                               - David Cochran

                                                       “Steam Engine No. 6201”

                  

     My first recollection of life began when I was 6 or 7 years old living in an apartment in Chestnut Gardens located coincidentally on Chestnut Street, in Bridgeport Connecticut, and truthfully was where my first vivid memories took place.  Oh sure, I vaguely remember living in Baltimore, Maryland...but nothing vivid...the alleys, the milkman delivering milk in bottles, the row houses, the relatives.  But that's all hazy.  I might be confusing trips we took down there on a semi regular basis.  Sometimes we drove but other times...boy, other times we took the train.  I loved going by train...I looked forward to those trips, however, I'm not sure my mother did...3 young kids on a train for 5 hours...by herself.  I say by herself because I never remember our father being on the train...he may have been, I just don't remember.  I loved looking out the window watching life fly by...the dilapidated apartment buildings, busy factories spewing their thick billowing clouds of black, choking smoke, the people in the cities hustling and bustling to nowhere in particular, and of course the conductor. 

     "Trenton, next stop Trenton.  Watch your step getting off."

     "Wilmington, Wilmington Delaware...next stop.  Make sure you have all your belongings.  Watch your step!"

     "Tickets, have your tickets ready."

     "Balt-tee-more. Watch your step, getting off the train."

     I always thought the conductor was God, or at least a policeman; directing and protecting while guiding and transporting his flock. His cool uniform and hat and all that stuff hanging from his belt or tucked haphazardly in his pockets.  Never did see a gun though, but that was probably hidden under his vest.  I couldn't think of a better job to have.  It's what I wanted to be when I grew up; that or a cowboy...a conductor.  Everything else was a distant second... or third, if you counted being a cowboy.

      Sometimes, we had to make this tedious trip by automobile.  My father was always along for those trips.  One time when driving down to Balimore, as Balimoreans would pronounce their city...we had to stop at a toll to deposit the quarter into one of those crazy baskets on the turnpike.  I never knew why we had to do this ritual, but every so often another one would appear and 'clink' it went.  Sometimes, a real person would actually take the money, but my father liked the exact change lane.  I think he thought it was cheaper.  Well, this time, Dad drove up to the basket, let fly his quarter...and waited, what seemed to be minutes but was probably only a few seconds. Where was that clink. Could it be?  Sure enough.

     Dad inexplicably missed the basket completely, hence the reason for no clink or for that matter no clank. You have to understand the basket was no more than an inch or two away from his hand. How could he possibly miss it? But miss it he did.  There were cars behind us. Cars on the sides of us...conductor-looking toll keepers eying us while the gate remained down.  Without saying a word, my father reached out his hand toward my mother for another quarter.  My mother without missing a beat and in a tone a judge would use handing down a prison sentence to a hardened criminal, emphatically told my father,

      "I'm not giving you another quarter...get out and look for it." (And next time be a good person and stay out of trouble)...Which of course my father dutifully did...standing erect at first, then crouched and finally on all fours looking under the car, on the New Jersey Turnpike, for a stupid quarter that my mother couldn't bear to part with.  I was angry with my mother for making my father grovel for that piece of change... But I was angrier with him for doing it.  He did eventually find it and we eventually continued on our trip...a little less prideful but a whole lot wealthier.  That moment was really the first time I noticed my parents interacting, perhaps other than my mom telling my dad to stop picking his nose...which of course he did.  I can't precisely remember which incident came first...they may have, in fact, happened on the same trip or even simultaneously.  Doesn't really matter, I guess.

                                                                                                           

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                   

 

 

 

 

 



© 2012 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
Had to repost this folks...accidentally deleted it .... duh!

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This was reall interesting. The details were awesome prefectly describing for me for imagery. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


sweet trip back, man, our heads on the same wavelength. i remember things like that about certain events...like seriously...i remember my baptism...and i was a baby...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good story telling. You brought your life experience to vivid life for your readers. Very enjoyable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed this story. I have similar stories of my grandparent who raised me. I like the description of the journey and the names of the cities. Thank you for a excellent story.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great! Short.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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deleted? oh my goodness...well it was even better the second time around..lol
I have always wanted to ride on a train..and I still do...I would much rather be on a train than a plane I think...When I read these chapters of your life, it reminds me of my grandpa telling us his life stories...life experience when I was a child..and I would stay up half the night listening, and when he finished one, I would say: Tell another...just one more...not that your old..not saying that..lol Im just saying that the chapters are so real to life..and one of these days Im going to take a trip on a train..So tell another Allen

Posted 12 Years Ago


as a past Balimoron... this was really... well done. Heart, thought, and just "on". I loved the trains as well - they had the sound that kept drawing you away. I even worked with Chessy RR a time or ten... for them but not part OF them.

Thanks for taking me along.

Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


shows the dynamic between both the mother and the father as the son observed. he may have passed judgement unawares on them, but he let it slide. this is a typical trip whee the children would see another side to their parents...the way the boy was upset with the father for actually retrieving the quarter for the mother. great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really enjoy reading real to live stories as that is one of my fav things to do! Reading of your life when you were younger and they way you describe it takes us right there along side you. Wonderful writing! I very much enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Recollective pieces to me are always a good read. It places me in the life of the author being able to experience their world, if only for a little bit. I never got to ride any trains. Crap not even to this day. Really like this one though. With the ending point of the interaction between your Father and Mother, it really punctuates how your belief system was molded.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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