I had to go back and read that last line and think about it.....and think about it.....and think about it. For some reason it punched me right in the stomach and tore at my heart.....love this one.
The universality of love, in it's ability to transcend time and distance, is not a new theme, but you have done it tremendous justice in this lovely piece, Allen.
now that is what i called love, nice write Allen, enjoyed this and hope you get the photo downloaded soon, be nice to see. I tried to review more of the chapters from your autobiography 'My Life' but i see there are no more to review yet, and here's me worrying that i was behind with my reviews! Bye for now. Trish.
Excellent short poem from Allen, with a lot of thought as well as a good structure, very disciplined write. I wouldn`t worry about photos, good writers like yourself do well with words !
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..