Days of Future's Past (Haiku)

Tomorrow’s sunshine

just for fun and just because;

I missed it today.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

written: July 25, 2009
Photo: Bonita Springs, FL .. January 16, 2010

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes, at times we do miss out...and tomorrow is a new day...
I'm always chasing tomorrow's Sunshine! lol
~I love the irony in this lovely Haiku~ Nice write!

[?]

AHHHHHHHHHH sigh
I missed it too....lol
Everyday a new day
Beautiful Allen

[Mark]

"When writes the poet
"In forms simple yet serene,
"The readers' souls smile"

[RainQueen]

It takes serious skill to be able to capture big meaning in so few words. You followed the constraints of the form perfectly, but made it appear effortless. Wonderful!

[patricia]

a thousand worded picture. Thats the beauty of being able to imagine, project or remember, we never have to stay where we are. Thankyou.

[Cassie Fraga]

make the most of a day!!! very nice!!

[Shy Girl]

So simple a thought...yet conveys a world of emotion. From wonder to loss of a day. Looking forward to a new tomorrow. Liked it alot....makes ya think :)

[Poetic Beauty]

this is beautiful and true.

[mark slade]

Haiku's are fun to write, I never really got the hang of it. As I can see you have. This was great, poignant. I enjoyed it immensely.

[Tate Morgan]

Oh I hope the sun comes up everyday i am alive